tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4751321921235259477.post1337954963376526404..comments2024-03-26T02:49:04.725-07:00Comments on Demitria Lunetta: Writing a Synopsis or Summary – The HookDemitriahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11597317699857591880noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4751321921235259477.post-23117890889532471842019-08-02T05:38:22.093-07:002019-08-02T05:38:22.093-07:00I am here to say thanks you to Dr Lucky my wife ...<br />I am here to say thanks you to Dr Lucky my wife was<br />was have herps diseases over 4 months and I went<br />to the hospital for medication thinking that it was a<br />little sickness but hearing from the doctor I was<br />afraid that am going to loose my wife because the<br />doctor said there was no cure but I should try and<br />contact a herbal doctor I have it a try and contacted<br />Dr Lucky I did all necessary things and got my<br />medicine through dhl services I gave it to my wife<br />behold in a week time the symptoms was gone and<br />after two good weeks my wife was free from hero's<br />diseases brother and sisters out there who don't<br />believe in herbal medicine stop deceiving your self<br />and contact Dr Lucky on this email <br />( drLuckyherbalcure@gmail.com ) or message him<br />on WhatsApp on<br />this same +2348154637647 he is here to help<br />spread this good new please and God in heaven<br />will bless you amen,<br />him can also cure<br />{1}HIV And AIDS<br />{2} HPV<br />{3}Diabetes<br />{4} Hepatitis<br />{5} Vitiligo<br />{6} Blood Cancer etc.john kelvinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09575965225511524490noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4751321921235259477.post-30118662873386815142019-05-27T22:08:47.483-07:002019-05-27T22:08:47.483-07:00I am so happy, i never believe i will be this happ...I am so happy, i never believe i will be this happy again in life, I was working as an air-hoster ( cabby crew ) for 3years but early this year, i loose my job because of this deadly disease called Herpes virus (HSV), I never felt sick or have any symptom, till all workers were ask to bring their doctors report, that was how i got tested and i found out that am HSV positive that make me loose my job, because it was consider as an STD and is incurable disease, i was so depress was thinking of committing suicide, till i explain to a friend of mine, who always said to me a problem share is a problem solved, that was how she directed me to Dr Isibor, that was how i contacted him and get the medication from this doctor and i got cured for real, I just went back to my work and they also carry out the test to be real sure and i was negative. Please contact this doctor if you are herpes positive diseases his email is: drisiborspellhome@gmail.com. or you can call or whatsApp his mobile number on +2348107855231.summer jessichttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01790577587938362390noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4751321921235259477.post-37930122287224980062011-02-11T15:02:17.130-08:002011-02-11T15:02:17.130-08:00After reading this post, I think my first paragrap...After reading this post, I think my first paragraph is my hook. lol I dreamed it up last night, actually. <br /><br />Here is a rough version: <br /><br />The first person Miranda killed was her sister; the second was her mother. It couldn’t be proven, but Miranda knew it to be true. Her father never blamed her, but learned early on that the truth could never be discovered, needing to protect her at all cost. Which he did… for a while. <br /><br />This is for the YA Fantasy I am currently working on.Miranda Hardyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17880449368013410349noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4751321921235259477.post-51360619814818323222011-02-03T09:54:46.970-08:002011-02-03T09:54:46.970-08:00I've got a few synopsis versions saved away......I've got a few synopsis versions saved away...<br /><br />My hook for my work in progress:<br /><br />"A group of terrorists work to start a war in the Middle East by striking at the heart of faith. A group of spies must stop them."William Kendallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00331324250821836822noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4751321921235259477.post-6429939724603660602011-01-31T20:56:37.351-08:002011-01-31T20:56:37.351-08:00I haven't even done a query yet. So I have no ...I haven't even done a query yet. So I have no synopsis.<br /><br />I like yours though. Definitely a hook.Melissahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12096764010151024050noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4751321921235259477.post-25322251698730164472011-01-31T20:12:31.303-08:002011-01-31T20:12:31.303-08:00Wow Demitria! That sounds incredible! I am indeed ...Wow Demitria! That sounds incredible! I am indeed hooked!!Colene Murphyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06086195075690893194noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4751321921235259477.post-42066750937651142242011-01-31T17:19:55.052-08:002011-01-31T17:19:55.052-08:00I love a good hook line, and you seem to be on par...I love a good hook line, and you seem to be on par with yours! Comes in handy when those agents are having contests. :)Alleged Authorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04869021184116123477noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4751321921235259477.post-22419242098704394302011-01-31T14:15:12.961-08:002011-01-31T14:15:12.961-08:00Thanks guys...I really did spend a lot of time rew...Thanks guys...I really did spend a lot of time reworking that hook, I'm glad it paid off. It's funny to put so much effort into three little sentences.<br /><br />J.L. - I want to meet this Mark guy :)Demitriahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11597317699857591880noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4751321921235259477.post-51156699925094640572011-01-31T14:11:05.658-08:002011-01-31T14:11:05.658-08:00Your hook makes me want to read the book. I'll...Your hook makes me want to read the book. I'll share my opening sentences,but they still need work. <br /><br />For five years years, Celeste Davies has racked up one personal crisis after another. She leaves Jamaica, determined to flee a disastrous situation and reinvent herself. But circumstances conspire against her in the form of Mark Weekes, who makes it difficult to remember why she swore off men and relationships.J.L. Campbellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05666634455836834179noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4751321921235259477.post-49722367177080721942011-01-31T10:32:50.249-08:002011-01-31T10:32:50.249-08:00WOW. Your hook is awesome, awesome, awesome. Sound...WOW. Your hook is awesome, awesome, awesome. Sounds way cool! And you crack me up! It's definitely too late for someone to steal your idea. You're almost there! LOL.Lisa Aldinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05423334732254639943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4751321921235259477.post-45135100899543797912011-01-31T10:23:01.071-08:002011-01-31T10:23:01.071-08:00Fantastic hook! I want to read!Fantastic hook! I want to read!Kristahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01742964597781601806noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4751321921235259477.post-9183527887854762112011-01-31T09:27:50.165-08:002011-01-31T09:27:50.165-08:00What a great post. Getting that hook has been ver...What a great post. Getting that hook has been very difficult for me. As I am re-writing my WIP now, I'll have to come back with the hook when it's done!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09179338199224761532noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4751321921235259477.post-65349356745840059492011-01-31T09:08:57.851-08:002011-01-31T09:08:57.851-08:00.it made me smile...I'm assuming it's a tr...<i>.it made me smile...I'm assuming it's a translated play.</i><br /><br />You assumption is correct - the play is in Russian but it has been translated into many languages, English too.Anachronisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10398058819007642332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4751321921235259477.post-7819994578645211962011-01-31T08:33:29.841-08:002011-01-31T08:33:29.841-08:00That's a really helpful article, I was never r...That's a really helpful article, I was never really sure what a hook should look like, and yours really does 'hook' the reader. :)Alex Mullarkyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12385523523229124157noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4751321921235259477.post-47756808760356440372011-01-31T08:30:00.482-08:002011-01-31T08:30:00.482-08:00Anachronist - That is an interesting hook...it mad...Anachronist - That is an interesting hook...it made me smile...I'm assuming it's a translated play.<br /><br />Lindsay - Love to hear it when you finish your manuscript. Good luck with the writing.<br /><br />Meredith - Thanks...my hook has gone through quite a few rewrites, but I'm pretty pleased with this version.Demitriahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11597317699857591880noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4751321921235259477.post-19375480603396691702011-01-31T08:22:15.858-08:002011-01-31T08:22:15.858-08:00Your hook has definitely hooked me! I'm workin...Your hook has definitely hooked me! I'm working on crafting my hook, and this is very helpful--thank you!Meredithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00462382909938737612noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4751321921235259477.post-54184612908347484222011-01-31T08:14:00.786-08:002011-01-31T08:14:00.786-08:00Oooh, I'd love to share mine - If I knew what ...Oooh, I'd love to share mine - If I knew what it was yet LOL! Maybe I'll hop on back over when I get it written:)Lindsay N. Curriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16347055390748782853noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4751321921235259477.post-37243418915913393372011-01-31T08:04:29.518-08:002011-01-31T08:04:29.518-08:00I've read the best hook some time ago and it w...I've read the best hook some time ago and it was of one of the most famous Tchechov plays:<br /><br />"Three sisters want to go to Moscow. Will they go? No they won't."<br /><br />Although it is deceptively easy and you can't fully appreciate it unless you know the play (Cherry Orchard) it makes me somehow as curious as a cat!Anachronisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10398058819007642332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4751321921235259477.post-90851752353297515532011-01-31T07:51:43.740-08:002011-01-31T07:51:43.740-08:00I'll head over there now to check it out!I'll head over there now to check it out!Demitriahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11597317699857591880noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4751321921235259477.post-37973123612455061652011-01-31T07:37:12.912-08:002011-01-31T07:37:12.912-08:00Actually, I tried to describe my WIP in two senten...Actually, I tried to describe my WIP in two sentences last night, and it didn't go so well. It was like three sentences and they were all run ons. So I'll get back to you on that when I have had some more practice...<br /><br />I have an excerpt of my WIP on howling Turtle though if you want to check it out!Larissahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12038601719253073714noreply@blogger.com